This is my second redraft of my double page spread. From my first draft, I felt that the page looked boring because nothing really stood out on it to catch peoples eyes and also, there wasn't enough pictures on it for people to look at. On my second redraft, I have inclduded more pictures at the bottom of the page, and added a caption above the picture in a bright red box to draw the audiences attention to look at it. One thing that I am happy with about is the masthead. The font represents her personaltiy as her being rebellious, and gives her to look of being a rockstar, refferring back to the genre of my magazine. I am also happy with the main photo that I have used on the page because I think it looks like a professional photo shoot, making my magazine look professional also.