This is my second redraft on my music magazine front cover. I took on all of the feedback that I was given from my 1st draft. I added a strapline mentioning the indie rock band Kings Of Leon so the audience will know what genre my magazine is. I added a photograph of from a concert underneath the headline 'Leeds Fest 2013' and lastly I changed the colour of some of my text so it was easier to read but also I added shadows and more effects to some of the text so it doesn't look plain and stuck to the page.